It was morning and i went to the beach there was a few bricks blocking the stairs to get to the sand and my feet were burning! I looked at the bricks with my face thinking of what to to do. I called to a stranger over near the kiosk but he didn’t here me so tried to pick it up my self. OMG, IT WAS HEAVIER THAN I EXPECTED! So there i was standing there like a complete idiot looking at These non heavy bricks, but they were actually really heavy so i finely decided to climb over them.
There were a few places where there was the incorrect punctuation but otherwise, it is a really good way of using that phrase. I loved it!